| James | How far did I go? | ||
| Sam S | “Weeee,” Blake thought. | ||
| Jonty | “I thought that I was going to win the race but I didn’t,” said Jono. | ||
| Blake | “I am going to win the race,” yelled Lily. | ||
| Seb | “That’s my favourite,” said Tim. | ||
| Margeaux | “I really want to get further than last time,” yelled Ruby. | ||
| Finn | Run. Run. Run. | ||
| John | “My legs are buried in sand,” giggled Ruby. | ||
| Megan | “How long is it until the 9 year olds race?” I asked my Dad who was helping out with the athletics. | ||
| Tim | “Go Lily go,” yelled the whole school. | ||
| Sapphire | Did I do well? | ||
| Lily | Logan thought “I am going to win the race.” | ||
| Ruby | Jump. Jump. Jump | ||
| Jacob | Wow! Did I beat my record? | ||
| Dylan | “We are going to have a good time at long jump.” | ||
| Ceanna | “Great job Ruby,” I yelled. |
Friday 18 November 2011
Hooks to Begin Our Writing
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Learning about the way to grab the reader is a lot of fun
ReplyDeleteI like the way you can hook the reader to your story. I think it's a lot of fun.
ReplyDeleteHooks are cool because they hook the reader's attention.
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ReplyDeletenice work James, that looks like fun!
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ReplyDeleteNice work James, that looks fun!
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Good work Kea Class. You did well at athletics.
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ReplyDeleteWell done kea class all of the hooks are good.
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